The Ninth Enemy (1948) by Francis Vivian

The Puzzle Doctor and Brad at Ah Sweet Mystery Blog have beaten me to the punch on reviewing this one, but hopefully I won’t be repeating too much of what they have said.


‘Inspector Knollis of Scotland Yard is hoping for a nice quiet weekend in the country. Instead he is embroiled in a murder case—the death by gunshot of local bigwig Richard Huntingdon. Jean, the dead man’s wife, discovers the body in dense woods near a river. Knollis soon learns that Jean’s previous husband also met an untimely end, not that she is the only suspect. Despite his reputation for good deeds, Huntingdon had enemies in the district, including the progressive Bishop of Northcote. And it turns out the late Mr. Huntingdon was intimately involved with a grade-A femme fatale… Knollis, along with the redoubtable Sergeant Ellis, has to deal with a plethora of puzzling clues before solving this bucolic case of Murder most Foul. Key to the mystery is a toy yacht found floating on the river near the body—a craft almost identical to the gift recently received—anonymously—by Huntingdon’s young daughter, Dorrie.’

Overall Thoughts

In this tale Inspector Knollis finds himself on a busman’s holiday, which is quickly established on the first page. Detectives never seem to be able to go on holiday without at least one person getting bumped off in the vicinity. Personally, I would get nervous if a sleuth came to holiday near me. It is almost advisable to go on holiday yourself, just to be in a different geographical area!

The victim is set up as a doer, who spends a lot of time being on committees and in hobby societies. Civic duty is important to them. However, as regular readers of a mysteries know, this does not automatically make someone a nice or agreeable person to be around. His self-importance is soon taken down a peg or two when one character mentions that: ‘He makes a lot of speeches […] His favourite speech is Chivalry in This Modern Age. It is alleged that the compositors on the Herald staff keep the speech made up in type and merely alter the name of the hall in which the thing is made, and the group he happens to be addressing.’

Hoax phone calls are a staple trope of classic crime fiction and can have many purposes. They can lead someone to their own doom, (see Q. E. D. (1930) by Lynn Brock), they can get someone out of the way so a murder can take place, (see Agatha Christie’s The Murder at the Vicarage (1930)) and they can also be used to bring more people to a crime scene so they can be incriminated for the crime committed, (see Welcome Death (1954) by Glyn Daniel). In Vivian’s book hoax phone calls are used for the first and third purposes, meaning a number of respectable members of the local community are found in close proximity to the murder. Without going into spoilers I would say Vivian does something else quite interesting with the hoax phone calls, which adds to the book’s overall puzzle.

Another aspect of the novel engagingly used is that of a child character. I felt the writer incorporated them into the central mystery with meaningful inclusion. I didn’t feel they were just there for comedy purposes by being obnoxious. Whilst the characterisation in this book is perhaps a little uneven, one character which did interest me was the wife of the victim. She initially seems something of a stereotype, but I think as the story progresses she becomes a more complex figure.

As I mentioned above chivalry was a favourite topic of the victim, so it was interesting to see how this concept then takes something of bashing as the narrative continues. There is a sense that it leads to unhealthy relationships. Early on in the story the victim is contrasted with the local bishop, with it being said that:

‘The Bishop is a firm believer in the equality of the sexes, and believes that women should stand beside men as equals and not ask nor expect any consideration as an alleged weaker sex. Richard was of a chivalrous nature, and believed that women actually were the weaker sex, and should be treated as such. Again, Richard believed in the inherent good in human nature, while the Bishop is a member of the old hell-and-brim-stone school, believing in original sin and the literal truth of the Adam and Eve legend. He lectures on the necessity of wrestling with the evil side of man’s nature, whereas poor dear Richard believed we should concentrate on the development of one’s better self.’

I found this interesting passage, as the way it parcels out different beliefs does not fully follow stereotypical lines. Ordinarily the stereotype would suggest that the bishop be against sex equality. Not a bad thing, just thought it was unusual. One thing that did puzzle me though was this comment about the victim:

‘The monkey-puzzle tree in the garden. That, according to your theories, fits in with his Edwardian ideas on chivalry. I mean, can you imagine a believer in sex equality having a monkey-puzzle tree in his garden?’

Is this actually thing? With trepidation I googled the symbolism of monkey puzzle trees and all I could find was an ‘old Fenland belief that planting a monkey puzzle on the edge of a graveyard would prevent the Devil from entering during a burial. This link with the Devil extends country-wide; many even believing that the Devil lives in the monkey puzzle tree’ (Woodland Trust).

The way the investigation develops and how information is brought out is done well and readers who enjoy a well-constructed crime would likely enjoy this mystery. Evidence is gained piece by piece and new and often perplexing information is dispersed effectively to maintain reader interest. The final quarter keeps the reader on its toes as the narrative seems to go one way and then another and then takes a final veer in another direction. One piece of evidence is withheld for a long time and the reason for doing so seemed a bit lame. I also did wonder about the fairness of the overall solution, as arguably one witness’s evidence is misleading. I appreciate it is up to the detective to follow these things up, so maybe it is just the timing of this inaccurate information which made it seem less fair.

Rating: 4/5


  1. This one I found to be dull beyond belief. Dead Opposite the Church his last book was also not very good. The Frog Was Yellow (don’t worry its a stone frog) was terrible. Thank goodness it wasn’t reissued. Vivian wrote books and articles on writing fiction so he should be able to write a decent book but I’ve yet to read one. I found a picture of the author in The Writer magazine which I sent to Dean Street so they could use it on their website.

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    • Well I don’t think it reaches the dullness levels of Freeman Wills Crofts or Gladys Mitchell, but I agree that the prose style can be workman like. Maybe it was just the context within which I was reading the book but the construction of the mystery appealed to me.


      • I don’t find Crofts dull at all in fact he’s my favourite GA author but ‘the great Gladys’ is a classic Marmite author and I’m in the ‘hate’ camp. Unreadable I must have tried three or four recently and not got past the first chapter every time

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  2. Enjoyed your review but did not like the book as much as you did.

    I felt that the decision not to pursue one line of evidence was a very serious weakness and slowed the plot right down.

    However, overall, this has been another interesting series from DSP.

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  3. Oh dear, Kate! I fear you have read the wrong title for today’s Book Club! We were supposed to read a highly tedious novel by Francis Vivian called The Ninth Enemy. What on earth did you read, and where can I get hold of a copy?

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    • oh very drole! Whilst it was not an amazing read I don’t think I disliked it as much as you did. I don’t read mysteries in that style very often so it might have worked as a reading palette cleanser for me. I don’t think I could read these back to back.

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